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Sofia Opened Her Own Curtains · Chapter 1 of 6

Chapter 1

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At 3:07 in the morning, someone knocked on my apartment door.

Not rang the bell.

Knocked.

Three weak taps, followed by silence.

I had been asleep for less than two hours. My daughter Sofia's wedding reception had ended shortly before midnight, and I had come home exhausted, still wearing half my makeup and with a dozen bobby pins I had been too tired to remove from my hair.

For a few seconds, I thought I had imagined the sound.

Then came another knock.

Tap.

Tap.

Nothing.

I sat up.

My apartment in Uptown Dallas was usually quiet at that hour. The city lights glittered through the bedroom curtains, and somewhere far below, a car moved along the wet street.

I grabbed my robe.

"Who is it?"

No answer.

I walked toward the front door, suddenly awake.

Through the peephole, all I saw was white fabric.

I unlocked the door.

And my entire world changed.

"Sofia?"

My daughter stood in the hallway wearing the same wedding dress I had zipped for her less than eighteen hours earlier.

Except it wasn't the same dress anymore.

The satin was torn near the shoulder.

The lace along one sleeve had been ripped.

Her veil was gone.

Her hair, which had been carefully pinned into an elegant twist for the ceremony, hung tangled around her face.

Her lower lip was split.

One side of her face was swollen.

Dark bruises were already forming around both arms.

For one horrifying second, I couldn't move.

"Sofia."

Her knees buckled.

I caught her.

"Mom."

Her voice was barely more than air.

She gripped my wrist.

"Please don't call the hospital."

"What happened?"

Her eyes darted toward the hallway behind her.

"They said if I tell anyone, they'll kill me."

Every muscle in my body tightened.

"Who said that?"

She closed her eyes.

"Carmen."

I felt ice move through my stomach.

"Carmen Robles?"

She nodded.

Javier's mother.

My daughter's new mother-in-law.

The woman who had smiled beside me in wedding photographs twelve hours earlier.

The woman who had hugged Sofia at the reception and called her mi hija.

My daughter collapsed against me.

I pulled her inside and locked the door.

Then I locked the deadbolt.

Then the security chain.

Only after that did I lead her toward the couch.

She could barely walk.

"Sit down."

"Mom—"

"Sit."

My voice came out harder than I intended.

Sofia obeyed.

I brought a clean towel, a glass of water, and the small first-aid kit from beneath my kitchen sink.

When I knelt in front of her, my hands began shaking.

The bruises on her arms weren't random.

They looked like fingers.

Someone had grabbed her hard enough to leave marks.

"Sofia, I need you to tell me everything."

She stared at the floor.

I knew that expression.

I had seen it when she was eight years old after falling from her bicycle and breaking her wrist.

I had seen it when she was sixteen and a boy at school spread rumors about her.

She was trying not to cry because crying would make everything real.

So I waited.

Finally she whispered, "After the reception, Javier took me upstairs."

"To the honeymoon suite?"

She nodded.

"He said he needed to talk to someone downstairs. I thought it was about the hotel bill."

Her fingers tightened around the towel.

"About twenty minutes later, Carmen came in."

"Alone?"

Sofia shook her head.

"Six women were with her."

I froze.

"Who?"

"Two of Javier's aunts. His cousin Marisol. Three other women I barely know."

She swallowed painfully.

"They locked the door."

I stood.

"What?"

"Mom, please."

"They locked you in a hotel room?"

Sofia started crying.

"Carmen had papers."

"What papers?"

"Something about transferring the condo."

For a moment, I couldn't understand what she meant.

Then I did.

My daughter's condo.

The luxury two-bedroom apartment in Uptown Dallas that her father, Colonel Alexander Brooks, had purchased for her when she graduated college.

The one asset that belonged solely to Sofia.

The one thing Carmen had been asking about since the engagement.

I sat beside my daughter.

"What exactly did she say?"

Sofia looked at me.

"She told me that now that I was married, everything I owned belonged to Javier's family."

"That's nonsense."

"I told her that."

"What happened?"

She looked away.

"Carmen said I was disrespectful."

Her voice cracked.

"She grabbed my hair."

My stomach twisted.

"Then she told me to sign."

"And you refused."

Sofia nodded.

"She slapped me."

A terrible quiet filled the apartment.

"Again," she whispered.

I reached for her hand.

"And again."

She started trembling.

"I counted at first."

"Sofia—"

"Forty."

I stopped breathing.

"I counted forty before I lost track."

My eyes burned.

"The other women laughed. They said a stubborn daughter-in-law had to learn respect."

I wanted to scream.

Instead I asked the question I already feared.

"Where was Javier?"

Sofia didn't answer.

"Sofia."

Her eyes finally met mine.

"He was outside."

The words landed harder than anything else she had told me.

"You heard him?"

She nodded.

"They called him once."

"What did he say?"

She closed her eyes.

"I heard him tell Carmen, 'Just don't hit her face too much. People will notice tomorrow.'"

I stood so quickly the coffee table shook.

"No."

"Mom—"

"No."

I turned away because I couldn't let my daughter see the rage on my face.

Javier.

The man who had stood in front of two hundred guests and promised to protect her.

The man whose hand I had placed hers into.

The man who had kissed her under white roses while everyone applauded.

He had stood outside a locked door while his family attacked his bride.

For property.

I reached for my phone.

Sofia grabbed my wrist.

"Don't."

"I'm calling the police."

"No."

"Sofia."

"They know where I live."

"Then you aren't going home."

"Carmen said—"

"I don't care what Carmen said."

Her face crumpled.

"She said they have people who can make problems disappear."

I studied my daughter.

This wasn't only fear.

Someone had spent hours convincing her she was powerless.

I lowered my voice.

"You came here."

She nodded.

"That means somewhere inside you, you knew they were lying."

She cried silently.

I wrapped my arms around her.

For several minutes, we stayed that way.

Then I remembered something.

Someone.

A man whose number had remained saved in my phone even though I hadn't called it in nearly ten years.

Alexander Brooks.

My ex-husband.

Sofia's father.

Colonel Brooks and I had divorced after years of deployments, distance, and arguments neither of us knew how to resolve.

We hadn't ended well.

Eventually we stopped speaking.

But there had been one thing Alexander loved more fiercely than anything else in the world.

Our daughter.

I looked at Sofia.

"We're calling your father."

Her head snapped up.

"Mom."

"He needs to know."

"He hasn't talked to us in years."

"He hasn't talked to me."

"Same thing."

"No."

I picked up my phone.

"He is still your father."

My fingers hovered over the contact.

Alexander Brooks.

For ten years, I had wondered what I would say if I ever called.

Now there was only one thing to say.

I pressed the number.

It rang once.

Twice.

Then a familiar voice answered.

"Elena?"

My throat tightened.

He recognized my number.

After all these years.

"Alexander."

Silence.

"What's wrong?"

He knew immediately.

I looked at our daughter.

"Our daughter was attacked on her wedding night."

Nothing.

No question.

No breath.

Then his voice changed.

"Where is she?"

"With me."

"Who did it?"

"Her husband's family."

A pause.

"How bad?"

I looked at Sofia.

"Bad."

Another silence.

Then Alexander spoke with a calmness that frightened me more than shouting would have.

"Send me your address."

"You don't have it?"

"No."

"I'm in Dallas."

"I know."

That surprised me.

"How quickly can you get here?"

"I'm already in Dallas."

I frowned.

"What?"

"Send me the address."

The call ended.

Thirty minutes later, the doorbell rang.

I checked the peephole.

Alexander stood outside wearing jeans, boots, and an old military field jacket.

His hair was grayer than I remembered.

His shoulders seemed broader.

But the moment I opened the door, I saw the same eyes.

He stepped inside.

"Where is she?"

I moved aside.

Alexander saw Sofia.

And stopped.

My daughter sat curled against the couch cushions, wrapped in a blanket, her torn wedding dress still visible beneath it.

Alexander stared at the bruises on her arms.

Her swollen cheek.

Her injured lip.

For a moment, he looked like a man who had forgotten how to breathe.

Then he crossed the room.

He knelt beside her.

"Baby girl."

Sofia made a sound I will never forget.

"Dad."

She fell forward.

Alexander caught her.

For several seconds, he simply held her.

His hand rested gently against the back of her head.

"I've got you."

Sofia cried against his shoulder.

"I'm sorry."

Alexander pulled back.

"For what?"

"I married him."

He stared at her.

"That isn't something you apologize for."

"But you warned me about—"

"No."

His voice stayed calm.

"You believed someone loved you. That's not a crime."

His eyes moved across her bruises.

Then something changed in his face.

I had seen Alexander angry before.

During our marriage, we fought over bills, deployments, missed birthdays, and countless ordinary disappointments.

This wasn't anger.

This was something colder.

Controlled.

Focused.

He looked at me.

"Hospital."

Sofia immediately shook her head.

"No."

Alexander turned back.

"Why?"

"They threatened her," I said.

"Who?"

"Carmen Robles."

He stood.

"And Javier?"

I hesitated.

Sofia answered.

"He knew."

Alexander's jaw tightened.

"He was outside the door."

Silence.

Sofia whispered, "He told them not to hit my face too much."

Alexander closed his eyes.

Only for a second.

When he opened them again, the father kneeling beside his daughter was still there.

But so was the colonel.

"Elena."

"Yes?"

"Get her coat."

"Why?"

"We're going to the hospital."

Sofia began to protest.

Alexander crouched beside her again.

"Listen to me."

She looked at him.

"No one gets to threaten you into hiding what they did."

His voice was soft.

But every word landed like steel.

"We document everything tonight."

Sofia wiped her eyes.

"What if they come after us?"

Alexander glanced toward the dark windows.

"Then they picked the wrong family."

My phone vibrated.

I looked down.

Unknown number.

A message appeared.

WHERE IS SOFIA?

Then another.

SHE TOOK SOMETHING THAT BELONGS TO US.

Alexander saw my expression.

"What is it?"

I handed him the phone.

He read the message.

Then he looked at Sofia.

"What did you take?"

Her face changed.

"I forgot."

"What?"

With trembling fingers, Sofia reached beneath the torn layer of her wedding dress.

She pulled out a folded envelope.

"I grabbed this when I ran."

Alexander took it.

"What is it?"

"I don't know."

He opened the envelope.

Inside was a photocopied property transfer agreement.

Sofia's condo address was printed across the top.

At the bottom was a signature line bearing her name.

Except Sofia hadn't signed it.

Someone else had.

Alexander studied the page.

Then looked at me.

"This isn't only assault."

"What is it?"

His eyes hardened.

"It's a plan."

And suddenly I understood.

They hadn't attacked Sofia because she refused to surrender the condo.

They had attacked her because someone had already prepared to take it.

Whether she agreed or not.

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